Writer's Block: Riddle me this
Sep. 24th, 2011 11:58 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
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Hey, Writer's Block tourists, you can skip this one: I don't get how people can misinterpret the plot of Lunar: The Silver Star so badly. There're a couple NPCs in Marke to explicitly hit the clueless over the head with a two-by-four ("Wow! So Ghaleon'd burned his creme brulee all along!" "If Ghaleon'd burned his creme brulee all along, why was he mad that Althena blew up the kitchen? He must've been known that Dyne'd just put in new countertops!"), there isn't one bit of surprise or shock in that meeting atop Myght's lab, there's always considerable emphasis both pre- and post-revelation on the injustice of being used and tossed aside, not simply killed... To say nothing of the plain bad storytelling involved - it makes no sense for the villain to be acting on misinformation and never once come to terms with his mistake.
TSS had an original conflict and motivation for its villain that fostered nuanced characterization on which the series - the good parts of the series that dealt with the matter - consequently built. It's something of which to be proud, and yet we're choosing to bury it for an idiotic oops-my-bad plotline. I just don't get it.
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Hey, Writer's Block tourists, you can skip this one: I don't get how people can misinterpret the plot of Lunar: The Silver Star so badly. There're a couple NPCs in Marke to explicitly hit the clueless over the head with a two-by-four ("Wow! So Ghaleon'd burned his creme brulee all along!" "If Ghaleon'd burned his creme brulee all along, why was he mad that Althena blew up the kitchen? He must've been known that Dyne'd just put in new countertops!"), there isn't one bit of surprise or shock in that meeting atop Myght's lab, there's always considerable emphasis both pre- and post-revelation on the injustice of being used and tossed aside, not simply killed... To say nothing of the plain bad storytelling involved - it makes no sense for the villain to be acting on misinformation and never once come to terms with his mistake.
TSS had an original conflict and motivation for its villain that fostered nuanced characterization on which the series - the good parts of the series that dealt with the matter - consequently built. It's something of which to be proud, and yet we're choosing to bury it for an idiotic oops-my-bad plotline. I just don't get it.
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